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Why do I want to die?
Who made these damn emotions,
The ones that run through me?
I don't want them!

They do nothing but lie to me.
Take my heart and rip it to pieces.
Won't they let me go?
Just free me from it all...

Look at me, can't you see?
I have fallen down into the deep.
Look please, just look at me.
I hate to blame, but you're not innocent here.

Why?
I'm just going to say it,
Because it's no secret
I love you.
And nothing can change that

Come and try,
To make me move on
I'd like to see that...
At least you'd be here.

So, can you see it?
See what I know is there.
Or what isn't.
See or touch; look into my eyes.
Is there anything?

I know that you just might care.
Even if it's just a little...
You said you could never hate me
So, at least, can you save me?
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New stuff, still depressing.

This is my first poem into my new The Used notebook.
Wrote, again, during Algebra this morning.
Bit by bit between my Happy Noodle Boy drawings.
I've really grown obsessed with JTHM.

For those who know me, you know who it's to.
I don't why I still write these...she'll never read them.

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I do the same I write for him as if he might actually read it haha I'm laughing at my stupidity. I like it though depressingly awesome.;)

--
" empty is as empty does."
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Ah, we all do it.
Feels better to get it all out, right?
<3 I'm glad you like it though.

--
{ u n t i e } the balloons
from around my neck ,
and ground me .


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